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Tieria Erde - Gundam 00

Ok, honestly this is my first true (nothing weird thrown in) Fan art in a long time. As it is I am incredible happy with this pic (mind the challenges). I Love Tieria, since he first came on screen with Virtue (‘Defense Armor That Gundam Has Defense Armor! Squeal’- seriously folks that is what I did, you can ask) I knew I had found a new Gundam character to love. Yes he started as a jerk, and hated pretty much every one. Sure he had a huge amount of mental issues, but if Gundam 00 who didn’t?

With out ranting, Tieria has earned a place in my heart with Zechs Merquise, Treize Khushrenada, and Schwarz Bruder.

… And now to knock me down, a few production notes.

This was meant to be done in marker, but the Devil (My Daddy’s Doggie) Ate my prized Prisma Color Skin tone Markers. So I cleaned the Hell out of it with the Contrast and brightness tool in my photo editing program. And shipped it off to paint. There it remained for countless hours, as I cleaned the white speckles out. Then the color wouldn’t adjust, so I had to spend an hour cal berating my pallet with the official colors (From looking at the official art). The back ground was flat blue, but that seemed too simple. Inspired by a really cute bat pattern a good friend did (You know who you are) I did a Haru pattern. Well then that looked dumb with no shadow, so I had to add one. Lastly I signed it and added text. Frowned at it for a good ten minutes and then-

I smiled, I think it’s good. I’ll open it to critique, not for the Character but for the Technical stuff. Fan art after all really isn’t as cool as Original.

Critiques


:iconnikkicub:
Vision: Excellent as always. I love how you always seem to know what you want from the early construction lines - something most obvious on your YouTube presentations, but also in the quality of your finished work. You know what you want, you go for it, and your execution is gorgeous.

You specifically asked that we don't crit the fanart aspect of this, so let's talk about your background. Adorable and vibrant, this is a type pf background I really wound expect to see in any sort of Gundam piece, not even a chibi. It's a pretty standard type of background, but when you look closer you see a surprising complexity in the pattern. I like that. Beyond that, the various shades of pink and purple are a little surprising, but suitable nonetheless; it sets off the character nicely without any sort of detraction.

I love how you used shading to define the nose; actual lines would have been too harsh for this character, so it was a good choice. The shading on the clothes is also well-handled, and the hair for the most part. I WOULD like to see a little more highlighting along the individual 'clumps' of hair, but the shadows look great. The eyes are also prettily highlighted, and of course I'm a fan of using a darker shade of the eyecolor for the pupil. The foreshortening on the right (our left) leg is good for the most part; I only suggest moving the foot up a little more, to obscure more of the leg, and lengthening the character's left leg a little more. This IS a difficult pose and angle, and you actually did a pretty good job on it (and kudos for having the guts to try it - I've been avoiding it). One last thing - the glasses, and the dilution of color behind them, lood great!

Overall, very nice. It's a cheerful little picture that just makes me smile. ^_^ And, more importantly, it's fanart with a recognizable character, but also recognizable YOURS. I could pick your stuff out of a line-up anytime, and I love and respect that. :heart:
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:iconlakankaos:
How cute!

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R.I.P: Queenie
2008 - 2009
One of the greatest puppies I ever had. I always will remember you, my widdle puppy.
:icongundamzero:
Thanks Lakan-Chan!

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:iconnikkicub:
SO cute. I love his expression, looks like someone's managing to both annoy and confuse him. XD

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:iconwingedhippocampus:
What're the little bunny-looking things? o.o Can I catch them in my Pokeball? 83

The shading on the eyes is especially good.

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:iconrandypandy:
That's quite cute. ^^ I absolutely love his eyes and his hair.

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:iconsilentmoon913:
This is awesome, the coloring looks great! ^^ I thought you'd done this in Photoshop or something at first, it must have taken forever to get all of the little white pixels gone. ♥

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Indeed.
:icongundamzero:
I had only intended this for fun until I drew his expression in. In the first season Tieria spends around 70% of his screen time miffed about one thing or another. I think you analogy is perfect. Angery because he is confused :D

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On a scale from 1 to Hojo you are....well I'll be nice and leave that blank.
:icongundamzero:
Gundams Legendary Mascot, the Haru! Not sure you can get it in a Poke'ball. But I'm sure you could get one to follow you if you smiled at it!

Glad you like the eyes, I've been trying to get a better effect with my shading.

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On a scale from 1 to Hojo you are....well I'll be nice and leave that blank.
:icongundamzero:
Thank you! I spent alot of time on the eyes, and I'm glad you like the hair ^-^

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