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Acid Free World- Text

First Character from Acid Free World! This is Text the Super Computer. Text for some reason was really easy to work with; I hadn’t intended to color him on paint I just wanted to save his outline in case the pink hair didn’t work out.

After the initial issue of my computer refusing to color the drawling because I was “trying to divide by Zero” Every thing went smooth. This took half the time my little Fan art pic did, and in my opinion was more complicated. I think the background is cool, if not perfect; but I’ll just have to practice.

More on ‘Text’ and ‘Acid Free World’ at a later time feel free to ask me anything.

If you’d like to see Text in Steps check him out here [link]

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:iconnikkicub:
Your flair for planning every stage of a piece strikes again, and it's especially obvious with something like this. Deceptively simple at first glance but more complex the more you look at it, this piece has a wonderful balance and flow. It's obvious you're not just slapping thigs down willy nilly.

Personified supercomputers are a common conceit, but this is something you really have made your own. The building data coming together to make him is reminiscent of DNA, a particularly nice touch, and the ball-joint structure just visible beneath gives it both a technical and artistic look that I truly love. I especially like that it's even peeking through the ponytail! Computer personas tend to be either 'innocent' or 'wordly', but obviously artificial; this one combines the two and gives the impression that Text is his own person despite the confines of his nature. Very nice.

As ever, you AMAZE me with your Paint skills, and your anatomy is only getting better. The impression of floating in space is well done; my only complaint is that he looks more like he's complaining than waking up. Widen his mouth a little more for the yawn and perhaps put little tearglobes at the corner of his eyes; people's eyes tend to water when they yawn, especially when they first wake up, so it'll add a lot to the impression. Even if Text doesn't technically have such biology, it's a function he might have for purely social reasons, and it'll clear up the expression.

Overall, I am really, truly amazed by this. The binary background and the way the character comes together as he wakes is smooth, striking, and gives an immediate impression of the character's nature, and I love it. VERY nice. :+favlove:
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:iconmilenkomancy:
0.o Oh noes! He's dematerializing! j/k

Cool pik ^^

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:iconrandypandy:
Text looks like an interesting character, and so does Acid Free World. ^^ I like the codes of binary and the dematerializing (or rematerializing?) effect.

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:icongundamzero:
He's Actully apearing :D Having a soild form when your made of ever changing lines of Data takes to much effort unless he's needed.

Glad you like the Pic!

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:icongundamzero:
Glad you like the codes, I wasn't sure if the way I did them looked okay or not. He's just waking up, for a long day of what ever sentinate computers do.

I hope to have more On AFW and Text soon, I plan to post more when the cover is done.

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:iconnikkicub:
o_o

This is one of the coolest things I've seen in awhile. Awesome, AWESOME job.

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:iconrandypandy:
Alrighty. ^^ I'll be looking forward to them!

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:iconwingedhippocampus:
Freakin' sweet, I love how the digitized shell is forming or dissolving from around the gel-like inner body form.

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:icongundamzero:
Thanks :blush: I'm really glad you like him, I'm fairly fond of Text; To know you have such a high opinion of his first appearnce means alot!

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:icongundamzero:
Really glad you like his Design! It took a while to get the bands to look right, so I'm happy the effort paid off!

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