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Critiques
Personified supercomputers are a common conceit, but this is something you really have made your own. The building data coming together to make him is reminiscent of DNA, a particularly nice touch, and the ball-joint structure just visible beneath gives it both a technical and artistic look that I truly love. I especially like that it's even peeking through the ponytail! Computer personas tend to be either 'innocent' or 'wordly', but obviously artificial; this one combines the two and gives the impression that Text is his own person despite the confines of his nature. Very nice.
As ever, you AMAZE me with your Paint skills, and your anatomy is only getting better. The impression of floating in space is well done; my only complaint is that he looks more like he's complaining than waking up. Widen his mouth a little more for the yawn and perhaps put little tearglobes at the corner of his eyes; people's eyes tend to water when they yawn, especially when they first wake up, so it'll add a lot to the impression. Even if Text doesn't technically have such biology, it's a function he might have for purely social reasons, and it'll clear up the expression.
Overall, I am really, truly amazed by this. The binary background and the way the character comes together as he wakes is smooth, striking, and gives an immediate impression of the character's nature, and I love it. VERY nice.
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